Authenticity is the writer's watch word. If you're describing a
location like Chicago or Los Angeles, you'd better get the Starbucks at
the right corner of the intersection. Intend to sink a nuclear sub? Make
sure you mention all the right switches and buttons on the control
panel. If you don't, readers will let you know that you screwed it up.
David
Morrell, author of Rambo and over thirty other bestselling thriller
novels knows this rule. That's why he's attended the FBI defensive
driving course, knife-fighting school, and spent months learning to sail
a boat.
Of course, David Morrell can afford to spend
the time and money on research to ensure that his details are authentic.
The rest of us merely mortal authors aim a little lower.
In
my contemporary fantasy, Touching Madness, hapless hero River Madden is
both schizophrenic and a dedicated pacifist. (Think about it—would you
give a deadly weapon to someone who hallucinates?) But being a pacifist
doesn't excuse River from facing physical danger.
River
needs to 'get the goods' on a local mob boss and his drug lord
supplier. He convinces the criminals to rendezvous with him in an
abandoned factory under the pretext of making a drug buy. River's plans
never go quite like he intends. I needed a contingency plan that would
allow him to escape without turning to violence once things started to
go wrong.
That's when I thought about smoke bombs
(possibly because my brother got suspended from high school for a few
days for lobbing one onto the football field at half-time). According to
dozens of YouTube videos, they're dead simple to make, requiring only
stump remover, newspaper, string, and an empty soda can. It was exactly
the kind of home-made solution River would use. For the sake of
authenticity, I thought I better try it out.
Really
good smoke bombs aren't as simple as they seem. To get the necessary
billowing clouds of smoke I wanted, I needed to get the air holes just
right. And I needed a mass of bombs all going off at the same time.
Fuses were an issue. Cotton string just isn't that flammable. Throwing
them was a joke. I could barely get ignition when they were sitting on
the ground in ideal conditions. In the end, I ditched the smoke bombs.
But
all was not lost. I had a very authentic experience convincing the fire
department and my neighbors that I was only a harmless writer and not a
terrorist. I'm sure I'll use that conversation in a book someday.
K S Ferguson on Authenticity Being the Writer's Watch Word #WriteTip #UrbanFantasy #AmWriting
Friday, November 28, 2014Richard Parry on One Foot in Heaven Before the Devil Knows ... #Fantasy #Thriller #BYNR
Wednesday, May 14, 2014Labels: Action, Night's Favour, Richard Parry, Thriller, Urban Fantasy
Jennifer Cornet's #WriteTip on Why Book Covers are So Important #Fantasy @J_Cornet
Wednesday, April 2, 2014Order of Earth (Elements of Ink) by Jennifer Cornet @J_Cornet #Excerpt #Fantasy #AmReading
Wednesday, March 26, 2014The brass doors opened behind her bringing with it an unexpected guest.
“I knew you’d come home.”
Onyx’ heart sank hearing him speak in that gentle voice. He always used that voice when he knew he was wrong; when he was trying to make her forgive him. It felt repulsively sweet now.
“She was just leaving,” Jade said in a firm tone as she turned to face him.
“Nicky, you brought a bodyguard with you? That hurts,” he sounded genuinely insulted.
“Goodbye, Philip.” Onyx said softly, suddenly lacking the confidence she just had.
Philip reached out for her arm, but Jade intercepted the action, grabbing him by the wrist and twisting it until he let out an almost inaudible yelp.
“You will not lay a hand on her. Not now, not ever again. If you so much as brush against her in a way I don’t like, I will break every bone in your body, starting with your pinky toe and ending with your skull.” She twisted just a little further.
But he didn’t lose his composure. He looked Onyx dead in the eye, “Quite a lot of bark for your little Chihuahua of a friend here, huh? Nicky, we don’t need all of this. This running away, the muscle, the hiding out, we are better than this. You know I love you more than anything in the world. Just come home, baby. I need you. It’ll be different, I promise. I’ll start going to therapy like you always wanted. You can even hang out with that crayon haired one. No questions asked. Just come home. What do you say? Come on, I need you.”
“Onyx, don’t you listen to him. Put the bags in the elevator, we’re leaving.”
Onyx hesitated, switching her gaze back and forth between the two. He looked so hurt, so broken up, she just wanted to leap into his arms and console him. For a moment, she could feel her heart ripping in her chest; she believed him. She believed he meant he would change and things would be different. She believed it and she hated herself for it.
Onyx rolled her bags into the elevator before she lost her nerve.
“Goodbye, Philip.” She said again.
“If you love her even half as much as you say, you’ll let us leave here. You’ll leave her alone and move on with your life. But keep the therapy bit, you need it.” Jade winked at him before joining Onyx.
As Jade released his wrist, he noticed a small green marking on her arm; a very familiar mark that he knew all too well.
The girls disappeared down to the ground floor, leaving Philip alone in his flower filled living room. He pulled out his phone and hit speed dial.
“She’s with the Order of Earth. Find out what family, find out who their Protector is, and find out now.”
Cast in Blood (Morgan Blackstone) by Michelle Rabe @michrabe #Paranormal #Fantasy #TBR
Saturday, March 15, 2014NEW ORLEANS
SEP 4, 2009
The Assassin’s voice boomed through the closed double doors to the study for the fifth time since he’d entered the room with Morgan’s Blood Sons, almost five hours before. Marcus cringed as the doors were flung open, and Nicholas strode out, rage radiating from every inch of his six–foot, four–inch frame. Storm–gray eyes landed on Marcus, narrowed to slits, and he stalked past, commanding him to follow with an imperious wave of his right hand. Not wanting to piss the Assassin off more, Marcus bit back a snide comment, and followed him up the sweeping staircase to the mansion’s upper floors.“Damn it all to hell, Old Man!” Nicholas roared as he began pacing the landing at the top of the stairs. He wanted Marcus to throw himself against his temper to take the edge off.
Ye Gods, Marcus thought, we’ve done this more times than I’d care to count in the centuries we’ve known one another, but this is different. Well, something other than the fact that we’ve barely spoken a civil word to one another in almost two hundred years.
“I take it the boys couldn’t add anything to what we already knew. In spite of the almost five hour interrogation?” Marcus asked, fighting to rein in his own temper, leaning against the banister at the top of the stairs.
“Five hours?” Nicholas stopped moving. He turned to Marcus, meeting his eyes. The other vampire nodded. “It was really that long?”
“Yes. What’s next, Assassin?” Marcus asked, letting some of the frustration he felt give his voice a hard edge. The last thing they needed right now was for Nicholas to go soft.
“We can’t do anything before the sun sets,” he said, after giving Marcus a long, appraising look.
He’s assessed my well–being and decided I’m not fit for the field. I’ve seen that look too many times before and know better than to argue with him, Marcus thought, trying to work out a logical counter argument.
“I haven’t slept.” Nicholas sighed. “You look like death warmed over and those two are rattled.” He nodded toward the room where he’d left the younger vampires.
“Fine.” Marcus nodded. “I took the liberty of having my staff get us some SUVs. If Morgan’s alive, she’s going to need fresh blood. We’re going to need the extra room.” Marcus was almost certain that he didn’t have to mention that, but the desperate look in Nicholas’s eyes led him to believe that there was no such thing as being too careful in this situation.
“She has to be alive, Marcus.”
“We’ll find her.” Marcus answered, feeling like an ass for lying. We both know that the odds suck.
This could be nothing more than trying to find her body. Gods, whoever did this is going to pay.
“I have a very bad feeling about this,” the Assassin muttered, looking through Marcus. Nicholas’s mind was turning over what he knew, making connections and searching for others.
“How so?” Marcus asked, prompting Nicholas to think aloud, knowing it helped him make connections he otherwise missed, and it gave Marcus the opportunity to make a few as well.
“The security footage Danny sent over from the club’s parking lot shows Morgan and her attackers, but never their faces.”
“The club has cameras outside?”
“Apparently one of the human staff had some trouble right after the club opened. Morgan had them installed after that.”
“They could have scoped out the cameras. Not too difficult when you know what to look for,” Marcus muttered, his brows drawn together. “Why didn’t anyone see her being attacked, if it was caught on camera? Why are we just learning about this now? Just because she somehow jacked my mind and knocked me flat on my ever–loving ass.” Marcus’s words sped up as he continued, agitation given voice.
“The footage is stored on massive hard drives but not reviewed unless an incident is reported. Since no one reported her disappearance…” Nicholas’s voice trailed off.
“I have a feeling Morgan will be revising that policy when she returns.”
“If she returns.”
Labels: Cast in Blood, Michelle Rabe, paranormal, Urban Fantasy



